User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-14908162-20180526114014/@comment-35531447-20180528171236

Yeah, I believe Hazuki no Yume already has a translation for 'Hikari Yo' and the other song 'Koufukuna Shi wo' both versions have misreading of modifiers and objects. The edit translates 素直に応える純な君が好き as 'I can answer honestly and purely. I love you' while the first translation 'I love you, able to answer so honestly and purely' is a bit literal, but more accurate to what the orignal Japanese says which is among the lines of 'I love (the) you, who (can answer/respond) is so simple and honest'.

Also in line 4 there's a mistake in the English, 'You bed me to strangle you' is probably 'You beg me to strangle you'.