User blog comment:Stinkyhat/Jellyloid.../@comment-24464194-20150813015928

(since no one has been giving tips) Rerecord, my first VB was rushed and well, thishappend. So if there is something off with a note rerecord make something your proving of instead of having to create an ACT2 as soon a possible.

I have some questions though, what type of VB is this going to be or, how would you classify your voice? I'm asking this because the pitch you record on can affect your VB so it all depends on what you want to emphasize. Another question, did you make the second picture of her?