User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-24769672-20180608203236/@comment-35531447-20180610204125

From looking at their video of 'There is someone I can't meet even in a dream' I'd say that they definitely improved, but I am not quite sure what the requirements are to get onto the reccomended or neutral list. The first couple of lines aren't terribly inaccurate, but not stringed together correctly. The ちくちく part is describing the clothes the girl is wearing as being 'itchy' and her, wearing those 'itchy' clothes is trudging/ walking at an even pace. I'm not quite sure how they got 'Just as much as they've been dyed' from 彩られた分だけ ie: only the parts that are colored/decorated.