User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-14908162-20180517143831/@comment-35531447-20180519002350

I wouldn't recommend either of the two, first one doesn't really connect to the context of the song and has some grammatical misunderstandings of 度 and ほど. The second translation has a misreading of a postive/negative phrase and other misreadings of words.