Board Thread:Wiki Discussion/@comment-53539-20140917191749/@comment-35301431-20140917201438


 * My first issue is the sentence " This Vocaloid has achieved the following goals: ", a goal is more of a personal thing, so unless it is the companies desire for their product a Vocaloid mascot can't have or achieve a goal. Now when it comes to Zunko, the kickstarter campaign was an achieved goal by the developers.


 * Fingersoop's rendering of LOLA's notables. Without development information we can't state that she was the "First female Vocaloid", which is why "First Female vocal ever released" works best. We don't know if she was the only Vocaloid used in films, what we do know is that the producer acknowledged the use of Vocaloid.

So I think the listing as is is fine, if the matter is breaking the listing into sections then that may be doable.