User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-31842162-20170423105034/@comment-1523675-20170424062307

My correction on just your first some lines of 鬼火 by まさ 私の恨みは誰よりも強い > My grudge is stronger than anyone else 私を汚したお前を恨むぞ > I will loathe (lit. hold a grudge ageinst) you who defiled me 人形　人形　許しはしない > I am a doll, I am a doll, I will never forgive you 早く死んじゃえば？　早く死んじゃえば？ > Kill yourself now, kill yourself now? Following sentences have many grave mistakes, too. Misreading of words, particles, omitted subjects and objects and so on. Translating other people's words brings responsibilities. Your mistranslations cause much worse damage to Masa than there is no translation. I suggest you refrain from translating Japanese stuff unless you fluently read, speak and write the language without constant help of dictionary. For further study read the tutorial above.