Talk:Appetite of a People-Pleaser/@comment-34113677-20171228021427

Ghost, This idea you got, is amazing, like, using Sweets as a metaphor, genuis. The Art, perfect, i cant say much more. Those two are great. Amazing, even. Although, there are too main problems that I know you are far too familiar with. The instumentals and Tuning. The instumentals I can actually help with. In your music, you have a lot of instruments doing different things, which causes it to sound messy and all that. Maybe, if you had lss instruments, and used music techniques like Imitation, Discord, and stuff, your music would sound a lot cleaner. Also, there is an absence of a proper beat in your music. You cant hear it. Perhaps add one, and experiment. Now for the Vocals and tuning, something i am not great on. I have heard tuning is the hardest part, and i wouldn't disagree, but I know you have heard this multiple tims, it isn't all that clear, even with the lyrics. I think you should try and take some time off to work on them, and try and find the best way you possibly can to tune, wether it be lessons, help, or something. I cant exactly help here, but I have given all the help I can. I do have one tip. EXPERIMENT. Sulotions dont just magically appear, you gotta find them. Also, do not give up. Never give up. You don't know how close you are to being to a break through. Anyway, I adore your songs, I love you, And I hope to see some amazing work from you in the future, not that it isnt already amazing, and something you should be proud of cause you have talent-