Thread:Rilena/@comment-53539-20190611152901/@comment-9136029-20190611165907

Sorry if I didn't have the time to re-read what you had written yesterday Angel ^^"

After, even the "we" it's something that can be avoided actually. Passive forms are even better for articles, even in scientific papers they really love using this. Like instead of using "you should use this", rather using "this should be used" (it's an example of passive form). It's true, I could have used more of this when I did the corrections and re-readings the other days... ^^"

A thing that may help you a bit Angel, after you're finished writing but just before publishing, open the research tool (on Windows it's Ctrl+F after I don't know your OS) and search for "you" and look at the context. Then try replacing it :)