User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-173.57.65.128-20160803195441

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%82%86%E3%82%8A%E3%81%8B%E3%81%94%E3%81%8B%E3%82%89%E5%A2%93%E5%A0%B4%E3%81%BE%E3%81%A7_(Yurikago_Kara_Hakaba_Made) Could you check/edit this translation? I understand the gist of the song but I think there needs to be more detail?