Talk:Controversy Concerns/@comment-12.217.6.226-20120911201950/@comment-5051846-20120912160124

Cool, I hope everything is done grammatically correctly and I haven't made a typo anywhere! >.< Its also difficult to get everything to flow correctly when you are making single edits.

I could understand where both of you were coming from and what could cause the misunderstandings and accusations; so I had a go at working something out. Anything they thought needed clarifying I tried to clarify. I hope you don't mind.

I'd like to maybe go through it another time and perhaps put in some summeries of both arguements for and against the formular so people don't get the wrong idea from the first paragraphs.

Anyway, I hope it worked out. This article is a pain in the butt.