User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-25758860-20180714204908

https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=AhIPLdltlbY&lang=en&bl=vmp&ref=watch&forceedit=captions&tab=captions

How is this translation? (The currently published translation on the video is obviously vandalism.)