User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-25340994-20171026031751

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%83%89%E3%83%A9%E3%83%9E%E3%83%84%E3%83%AB%E3%82%AE%E3%83%BC_(Dramaturgy)#comm-84154 Could you check their translation?