User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-14908162-20170616165159/@comment-177.138.188.110-20170616230243

It was my first time translating a song Damesukekun, point out these mistakes if possible so I could fix then.

Except for this line "We are always asking for what we don't have" that was supposed to be "can't have" I don't know how to improve it. Thank you !!