User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-1.132.109.177-20180416061230/@comment-140.234.253.9-20180417161406

I've looked over my translation again and noticed a few careless mistakes, which I've now fixed, but if you have any further suggestions I would be happy to hear them--only if it's not too much trouble, of course.