User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-70.95.124.29-20170519163851

Hi there,

is this translation for Ikasama Life Game accurate?

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%82%A4%E3%82%AB%E3%82%B5%E3%83%9E%E3%83%A9%E3%82%A4%E3%83%95%E3%82%B2%E3%82%A4%E3%83%A0_(Ikasama_Life_Game)

I feel like there are some mistakes, at least with the "her feet glided" (because I think in the context of the song it's more like she slipped, because she fell in front of the train or the like due to the boy ignoring the premonition). But I don't speak Japanese at a level where I would be a good translator so I'm not sure if I'm right.