User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-36977550-20181217231649

Can you check translation? (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9oDFlHCmCTg) And also which translation of "Hatsune Miku No Shoushitsu -DEAD END-" is better? ArtemisA's https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/初音ミクの消失_-DEAD_END-_(Hatsune_Miku_no_Shoushitsu_-DEAD_END-) or yours https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qkTpJAhywg?