Talk:Controversy Concerns/@comment-3467648-20130405053019

Ok, I've been reading this article with calm and there's A LOT to fix. Too much reaffirmation and reiteration (gosh, it looks like something written by Mojo-Jojo). This thing could be summarized much more.

Also, we need to validate some points, specially in the design complications. Angel already found some good sources for the article, but there still. I need that someone could track the claims about Vocaloid China.

Also, I'm going to add the entries of Bruno and Clara's contest as example. These ones show good examples of the influence of Crypton.

Also, we could add the Taiwanese designs. They're a good example of the a cyber-tech details, that were massified after the release of Crypton's CV series.

I'm going to begin with the edits during this weekend. However, because I'm near the deadline for the results of my thesis, I'm going to need some help during the week (at least until the next Friday). After that I'm going to have more free time