User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-173.57.65.128-20160825041110

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%81%BB%E3%82%93%E3%81%AE%E5%B0%91%E3%81%97%E3%81%AE%E3%81%95%E3%82%88%E3%81%AA%E3%82%89_(Honno_Sukoshi_no_Sayonara) Could you check/correct this? The english seems a bit off/awkward