User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-47.185.226.122-20170428060509

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%83%9F%E3%83%A5%E3%83%BC%E3%82%B8%E3%83%83%E3%82%AF%E3%83%9F%E3%83%A5%E3%83%BC%E3%82%B8%E3%83%83%E3%82%AF_%28Music_Music%29

how is this compared to cysub's translation? (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uh8SAA0Q1TQ)