User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-173.57.76.183-20151030031523

http://shou7.tumblr.com/post/132177281920/translation-%E3%81%8A%E3%82%84%E3%81%99%E3%81%BF%E6%B3%A3%E3%81%8D%E5%A3%B0%E3%81%95%E3%82%88%E3%81%AA%E3%82%89%E6%AD%8C%E5%A7%AB-by-%E3%82%AF%E3%83%AA%E3%83%BC%E3%83%97%E3%83%8F%E3%82%A4%E3%83%97 can you check their translation please?