User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-36977550-20181130235017/@comment-11501835-20181201003438

Just a quick look.

昨日まで悩んでたー>I've been worrying until yesterday (not I was having issues since yesterday).

継ぎはぎのテディベアー>A patched up teddy bear. (The word "contain" in your translation is a bit heavy)

歩き出すー>Start walking (It's not "that I'm walking on)

獣道 has a technical term (Desire path). But if it's a metaphor to describe a bumpy road, I would use "as a road in the wild". "Animal trail" sounds a bit too cute.

From :43 to :50, I don't think you need to translate them.

生まれ変わってもー>Even if I was reborn. I don't think being reborn is an eventuality.

1:10 onwards, context misread. She's saying she will find a ribbon just for her that's impossible to unknot.

1:30 onwards, don't infuse the lines where you don't need to. "I already erased my graffiti/doodle" -> " I'm no angel', during a stupor" Here なんかじゃない is a form of 謙遜 by noting the absurdity in the premise that she is an angel.

悔しくてー>is not "I may regret this". She's already regretting it.

2:02 onwards, context misread. She's talking about having sent words of selfishness without properly trying to know what exactly she's trying to say, because she was vexed.

2:18 onwards, context is also misread. She's asking her teddy bear to watch her be independent on her own.

2;49 onwards, context is misread. 僕だけの痛みなんだ does not mean that it's her only pain, but rather her pain belongs to her and her only.

3:04 onwards, context misread. 伝えてしまったのは is not attributed to another person, but herself. So it's her that's telling things.

Mostly errors of who's saying what is what I find

I'm not sure if this is even the right thread for this