User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-87.205.50.129-20161218180620

Hello, could you please check if this translation is accurate? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fQl5XXmrS4eK7hFwQqmgMxk3B0xiiToF2sSS0FbGZEE/mobilebasic?pli=1