User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-1.132.109.177-20180414022701

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%83%AA%E3%82%A2%E5%85%85%E7%88%86%E7%99%BA%E3%81%97%E3%82%8D%EF%BC%81_(Riajuu_Bakuhatsu_Shiro!) chould check this translation please?