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Ah Episode 2 is easy to fix. I realized I made a lot of mistakes in the summary, I wasn't working in source mode ^^;

Ling wakes up in the morning and Longya greets her, however, she becomes annoyed and shoos him away. She goes to school (?) and later in the afternoon, she practices singing, but chokes up later on. After that, she becomes disappointed and leaves. Outside, she loses her piece of paper, but notices what she thought was a falling star in the sky and follows it. There, she finds the ship that Tianyi was in. The hatch opens with a surprised and "jetlagged" Tianyi in it. Tianyi falls out head first, and accidentally kisses Ling. She then flies up into the sky and is surrounded by screens, singing, while Ling was on the ground, watching her. Tianyi's singing caused a tree to grow in the area they were in

A little better?