User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-31844645-20180212030718

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=if6MsHFgHEY&lc=UgwInscgdXT1TUu_Mld4AaABAg

Apparently someone posted a more "accurate" translation to this video. But are they correct on that? Who's translation is better?