User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-25999319-20150112085133/@comment-1523675-20150113024453

Hmm... you misread some omitted subjects and objects, idioms and phrase structure. BE MY SACRIFICE: 私の手を　包みこんで 黒く染め上げて　いるんでしょ？ You wrap my hand (with your both hands) and stain it black > Your both hands hold my hand tightly and stain it black 消える温度　変わる景色 憎悪に満ちて Be My Sacrifice. (In this) fading temperature and changing scenery I am filled with hatred (so) Be My Sacrifice. 赤い沼の底: 赤い沼底 At the bottom of a red swamp 奥にギラリと生えているのは　針のサンゴ礁 What grows glittering (weirdly) far off is needle coral reef(s) > Needle coral reefs grow and gleam far off ここは光のささないところ This is a place where light doesn't reach > Here comes no light 罪人落ちる　永遠の苦しみ Sinners fall into eternal suffering