User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-178.67.231.200-20131108181400

http://berrysubs.blogspot.ru/2013/10/pina.html http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm16195283

Which translation is better? (I know the first one is newer, but can I check my translation with the second one?)