User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-30158224-20180514112500/@comment-35531447-20180514205644

Problems with the ～ば conditional and reading/interpreting of 程. In my opinion it's a pretty solid translation, but there are misreadings of words and omitted objects/subjects. I'd say it's neutral, but I'm not the one in charge here lol.