Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-5051846-20131016172937/@comment-3076833-20140305223716

Hm, it's not too bad but yes there's mainly the fact that there's simply too much going on in that design, it could do without the sash or the braid thing at the least. It (the design) also seems to want to blend in punk with traditional Germanic wear (In other words the dark arm accesories and boots clash with the style of her dress). There's always next time though, which will give plenty of practice time!