User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-68.170.176.241-20141219193052/@comment-1523675-20141221142847

The translation is correct grammatically, but word collocation seems unnatural for native Japanese.

You know, Japanese thinking and wording is very different from that of English. Word-to-word translating doesn't work in most cases.