User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-178.69.42.75-20140427142416

Hello, Damesuke-san. I have a question about this kind of situation when identic lines are translated differently. For example I will take a song I'm currently translating to my native language: Streaming Heart. (From Descent's translation, by the way) There're same lines but they were translated differently.

アイマイにしたいのさ 好きでいたって　歪んでく内声（ないしょう） アイマイにしたいのさ 嫌いになってしまえたら　大成功

I want to pull down the curtain on this love

An inner voice brutally warped by this relationship

I will aim for a "love-lost" ending to the story

Me giving rise to a sense of hatred would be a great success

Is it OK?