User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-173.57.76.183-20151109210856

http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E5%85%AB%E6%9C%88%E3%81%AE%E7%B4%84%E6%9D%9F_(Hachigatsu_no_Yakusoku) could you check/correct this please?