User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-26128399-20160629114059

Could you please tell me if this translation is good? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIDZdFBqEIA&list=PLMi1kULyS4HsSzk0gN6XsxAXEYg-5Xos-&index=132