User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-97.100.204.45-20180422154116

Hello! I want to start translating vocaloid songs, and I would like to ask if this translation is correct and what I can do better, if that's alright. Thank you in advance!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17yMubD2VYNzPFDts5uJuGwkiZFSgdU-BXmH5fteZLzw/edit