Board Thread:Off-Topic Discussion/@comment-5169986-20140109063755/@comment-32500188-20140129160051

Trainspud wrote: An Original this time, with Avanna

Sound cloud - Song for Tokimi

youtube- coming soon Nice. A few suggestions I'd like to add, though...

The same could go for Mew's Palette cover. The first point isn't as much here, but definitely want to take the second one into account here. :-) (...also, since it's a remix, @ 2:50, it sounds kind of off pitch-wise... since those chord changes are different from the original, I'd suggest changing the lower vocal harmony's D-C#-D-C# and making those sharps natural so it doesn't stick out as much.) (~_^)
 * You might want to tone the instrumental part that's playing the melody line while Avanna is singing down... there are some points where it seems to overshadow her singing, as well as giving the impression that she's behind the beat a hair or off the melody at times. It's fine to keep the melody line in the instrumental, but just make sure that the volume of it doesn't take away from the vocal highlight.
 * You also might want to in turn bring Avanna down just a hair in order to balance her voice with the music. Not too much, but just cutting the Gain down about a dB or two. While the vocals are important, you don't want your music to sound too soft in comparison.