User blog comment:CykeP/First Song: Feedback, Please!/@comment-32500188-20151019000112

Very impressive for your first VOCALOID song! It's a beautiful composition, and I love the lyrics you made there! Here are a few things to note though...

Dynamics... I think for the BGM, when it gets into the chorus part, it should come out just a little bit more, to add for the expressiveness you have there. I would say to do it successfully for the way you have it composed now, bring down the volume in the keyboard/synth parts just a bit during the verses, especially the in the beginning.

Mixing in general is alright from what I can hear on my end. Although, honestly, it's very hard to decipher what Miku says, because of how her English bank is so rough in pronunciation (and had the lyrics not been there, I probably wouldn't have been able to figure out most of what was sung)... but that's something that can't really be helped until CFM puts out a better English bank for her. Outside of that, sound quality-wise, she blends well with the music.

(And yeah, I hear what you mean about the cymbals in the chorus. It sounds okay, but I would cut back on some of the accent/off-beat crashes.)

I will also be keeping an eye out for your future works. Keep it up! (｡^ω^｡)