Talk:Kokone/@comment-17388794-20131229210733/@comment-24126259-20140111222418

Ubul the Foxy, just a heads up, you should NEVER criticize someone's art if you don't tell them what to do better. And even then, if you want to give constructive criticism, you should ask first.

Also, 'more younger' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'more young', or just 'younger'.