Talk:Hatsune Miku/@comment-763492-20140916165400/@comment-5051846-20140916171901

Sure, if you like I can try fixing anything I see wrong. :D

Firstly when you say 'sentences', what you actually mean is 'paragraphs'. Paragraphs are blocks of text like those you wrote. Each sentence is separated by a full stop. Paragraphs are made up of lots of sentences. What you've written is 2 paragraphs. I hope that makes sense.

Here is my version of what you've written, edited where there are any mistakes:

1.  History about Hatsune Miku: Hatsune Miku is a virtual pop star and female singer who made her debut on August 31, 2007 as the illustrated mascot for a voice synthesizer software called “Vocaloid”. She has distinctive blue-greenish pigtail-style hair, and a school uniform which is made to look futuristic. Her outfit is black, mixed with a variety of colours, and her age is 16. After her debut upon the release of  “VOCALOID2 Hatsune Miku”, Miku has become a worldwide phenomenon and part of popular culture. She is been featured in more than 1,000,000 derivative artworks, and 100,000 songs which are created by users of the software. Her popularity has allowed Miku to have spin-offs in not only video games and merchandising, but also live performances in a series of successful 3D-concerts held worldwide. She has also made appearances in TV commercials (e.g. Toyota USA, Google, etc.)



2. 2.  History of Vocaloid: Vocaloid is a series of singing voice synthesizer software developed by Yamaha. It allows users to create songs using various vocals from scratch, to fit many different melodies and lyrics. The series comes with a variety of different languages, such as Japanese, English, Chinese, Spanish and more. Many different Vocaloids and the variety of illustrated character mascots are developed by Yamaha and other companies around the world. Vocaloid has become used as a music instrument and tool for many users, both amateurs and professionals alike. It allows them to create and release many songs in many different genres and tunes, however there can be some copyright issues.

