Talk:Kizuna Akari (VOCALOID4)/@comment-53539-20180428101909/@comment-9136029-20180429131822

Not really sure about this, but replace the whole second sentence (which is currently not neutral, especially its end and I think this is what disappoints you) by "As a result, even if Akari does not have the expression that Yukari has, nor does have any additional voicebanks, she may be suitable for a larger range of songs"... ?? (If this is what you mean) The problem may that it may be repetitive with the first one though. If you're also afraid of this, remove as well the "has a superior range in total" in the first sentence.

Or else, completely remove the second sentence for the moment?