Talk:Controversy Concerns/@comment-53539-20120502120019

Need to give some time for feed back at this stage.

What did I do? Mostly it was resuffling information around and focusing more on explaination the subject better. This version pretty much focuses on explaining what it is and what the design contraversal issues aremore then telling you what the formula is and then seeming to accuse every Vocaloid of following it.

It still needs work, but without feed back I can't move forward at this stage. :-/