User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-173.57.76.183-20151120195458

http://rainofashe.tumblr.com/post/133577377147/%E3%82%B7%E3%83%A5%E3%83%BC%E3%83%86%E3%82%A3%E3%83%B3%E3%82%B0%E3%82%B9%E3%82%BF%E3%83%BC-shooting-star-english-translation can you check theirs?