User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-71.209.39.194-20150627044757/@comment-1523675-20150628011941

Your translation has no grave mistake but seems a bit literal. For example, 恋に落ちた それは突然 僕に起こった出来事 would be "I fell in love all of sudden" and 恋の力 それは確かに 僕は感じてる "(Now) I surely feel the power of love". For better translations, try to grasp the whole picture of the lyrics more than seeing each word and sentence.