User blog comment:Damesukekun/Song Translating and Mistranslating/@comment-40067877-20190710031604

Would this translation for 'Ene's Cyberkinetic Journey" be more accurate than the one that was removed?

https://polarisuniqueold.tumblr.com/post/36269635241/kagerou-project-ene-no-dennou-kikou-lyrics